Examples:

Sticky, wet disgusting air wrapped around me keeping me awake. Moonlight seeped through the cracks of my home. Summer in the South is a haven for every critter and creature, every insect and pest. The words of all is the Master of my plantation, Mr. Middleton. I lived here – or I should say that I survive here. I was tired- tired as a worn out ol’ mouse that barely survived a chase with a cat. It has been a long day working in the fields. My long hair clung to my neck like molasses.

The air clung to me like a wet blanket, the air that was as hot and humid as any South Carolina noontime day. The moonlight filtered in through cracks in my cabin walls. I could not sleep in the miserable place. The Middleton Plantation was no happy home. After a full day working in the blazing sun of the North Meadow Field, I was exhausted. I plucked a cotton thorn out of my long skirt. Aaah! I wish this part of my life would finally be over.